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So much fire Greedy
Posts : 62 Dem' Reps : 4 Join date : 2015-01-06
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 4:51 am | |
| I'm this bloke popped in my head today so I made him up befor his manlyness got him away - Code:
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Name: Rick - Code:
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Nickname: rickie
Race: Human
Age: 37
Gender: Not just male he's a manly man
Physical Description: Standing at 6.3 feet he is mostly muscly but Carly's a slight beer gut ( cubby belly for you who don't understand). He has a short beard, moustache, side burns and all the rest of the facial hair collection. His eyes are such a dark brown manly claim them to be black. He wears a pair of black boots, camo cargo pants, a white shirt with its sleeves ripped off and brown leather gloves. His skin is tanned from hours of work in the sun.
Personality: Rick has a big heart full of kindness. He's ready to help in anyway possible and does it with a smile on his face. But expect the insulting joke every now and then for its his way of showing affection. Even with his heart of helping hands there's one thing that can turn him into anyone's nightmare and to sum it up he builds for the good of others, so don't destroy it or he will put you six feet under.
[b]Personal History:Rick use to live on the outskirts of a ever growing city. He worked as a contract logger meaning he cuts down trees to make space for stuff with his exo suit that is designed to cut down trees and carry them back on at a time. His life was like that for a long time until on day. He found a strange building in the middle of a forest. He smashed his way in to find a weird looking device without hopping out of his suit he pushed a button and with a flash he was never see again ( in that dimension at least). Coming out of the Grasstown teleporter room. After the towns folk helped him find out what happen he had two choices go find another odd building somewhere on the surface and go home or stay on the island. He chose to stay to help on the island where he now makes a living with construction using his suit. - Code:
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Weaponry: a large revolver that fires powerful rounds but only has 5 shots loaded at once.
Magical Talents: he can drink loads of beer before getting smashed of his face on it.
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Ricks Strengths: physically strong - Code:
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Willing to take one any challenge - Code:
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Ricks Weaknesses: low ammo count for revolver - Code:
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Likely to insult the wrong person or thing - Code:
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Suits Strengths: mesh armour provides good protection from large falling objects and blunt melee weapons. - Code:
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Suits Weaknesses: very loud - Code:
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Other:(tree lobbing exo suit) his suit stands 10 feet tall. It's big bulky and painted danger yellow. It's equipped with a chainsaw with a 3 foot long bar that folds out of the suits right wrist and a powerful hydraulic ram one the left wrist. The suit doesn't supply much protection from bullets but knifes and blunt objects will struggle to get the operator thanks to the mesh armour. The operator wears a welding mask looking helmet with a HUD system to show power use and loud.
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So much fire Greedy
Posts : 62 Dem' Reps : 4 Join date : 2015-01-06
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 4:52 am | |
| Why the bloody hell is it all purple | |
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The Lithping One Admin
Posts : 267 Dem' Reps : 15 Join date : 2014-10-20 Location : Denial
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:26 am | |
| Looks like you used (code) instead of (b). | |
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The Lithping One Admin
Posts : 267 Dem' Reps : 15 Join date : 2014-10-20 Location : Denial
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:32 am | |
| K, besides the weird code and such, it looks like just about every section needs just a bit more in it. But, since separate dimensions are never mentioned, I'd ask for a revision of history to omit that xD | |
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So much fire Greedy
Posts : 62 Dem' Reps : 4 Join date : 2015-01-06
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 8:07 am | |
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The Lithping One Admin
Posts : 267 Dem' Reps : 15 Join date : 2014-10-20 Location : Denial
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 10:19 am | |
| Looks good, but all the weaknesses just seem to be debuffs on his strengths. What trips him up, does he have irrational fears etc? | |
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So much fire Greedy
Posts : 62 Dem' Reps : 4 Join date : 2015-01-06
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 2:58 pm | |
| There ha go he can't hold back in his insults I didn't add that before but I'm guessing I still need more. | |
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The Lithping One Admin
Posts : 267 Dem' Reps : 15 Join date : 2014-10-20 Location : Denial
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Wed Feb 18, 2015 5:00 pm | |
| Yeah a bit more, sorry *~* | |
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So much fire Greedy
Posts : 62 Dem' Reps : 4 Join date : 2015-01-06
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Sat Feb 21, 2015 6:31 pm | |
| Well these less but I removed those debuffs and put ricks and his suits strengths and weaknesses seperate | |
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The Lithping One Admin
Posts : 267 Dem' Reps : 15 Join date : 2014-10-20 Location : Denial
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Sat Feb 21, 2015 6:46 pm | |
| Still not exactly what I'm looking for, but I'm sure you'll flesh everything out in-RP :3
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So much fire Greedy
Posts : 62 Dem' Reps : 4 Join date : 2015-01-06
Character Race: Robot
| Subject: Re: Rick the manly man Sat Feb 21, 2015 6:48 pm | |
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